Scared to look at the fallen petals, might break my heart into pieces like the fallen petals…
I lay on the lush green lawns,
Dressed in shy smile,
Held a rose in hand,
To pluck the delicate petals,
With the words resonating in mind,
“Whether he does or doesn’t love me?”
Your portrayed image lingering,
In the canopy of my thoughts,
Reflect on the vaporized sheet of the sky,
But halt at the twinkling stars grin,
For being childish or
For being in love?
I wearily break the perturbed mood,
By pelting pebbles to blew ripples,
On the surface of the still tarns,
reflecting fallacy in wrinkled waters ,
But Alas! Lost in isolated islands,
A sweet thorn of hurting,
pricks my heart with the wait,
reaching for eyes as tears,
scared to glare at the fallen petals,
might break my bleeding heart into pieces,
while I wait for love..
I still stood there,
awaiting the touch from wind,
to bring his answers to my soul,
“Whether he does or doesn’t love me?”
to be continued……
Regards,
Pratyusha K.
That’s me in the picture. One of the best views I have ever seen ! 🙂 Felt refreshing 🙂
Lovely one. Waiting for more.
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Thank you 🙂
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Waiting for part2 🙂
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Yo.. 🙂 will be out soon. 😉
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Very tender!
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Thank you 🙂
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Very moving….could follow in my mind and I loved when the sweet rose thorn came in….very nice…can’t wait for part 2…..happy holidays….kat
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Hey, I am glad you loved it .. 🙂
Yes, would come up with part 2 very soon 🙂
Happy holidays to you too 🙂
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Lovly…….
Waiting for 2 scnd part…
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Hehe…part 2 will be out soon ! 🙂
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Awesome eagerly waiting for 2nd part.
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Thank Ankita 🙂
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https://saharaina.wordpress.com/2015/12/20/3-days-3-quotes-day-3/
I hope you enjoy the nomination:)
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Thank you so much ! This is indeed challenging. Will definately work on it ! 🙂
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You’re welcome:)
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Lovely 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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wow photo is nice first of all.. then your writing 🙂 cheers
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Thanks Aditya 🙂
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Wow!!! And love could be defined in so many ways…..I love your perspective.
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Thank you Rujuta 🙂
Means a lot 🙂
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