She was a puppet
held in the tight
clutches of the chains
tied up as a captive?
Or a slave?
The agitated soul
was left deserted
in the cage like invisible walls,
that was caving her in
with shredded remains.
Her feet stumped
under the wired mess.
Ceasing her flight
each time she tried.
She whined and squalled with tears,
That dried up with the wait!
She tried! & yet again.
But her fluttered wings,
seemed powerless and bruised
To ease the grip
of the iron maiden.
But she never succumbed to defeat,
And nested her fears
On the oasis of hope.
She quoted,
βthat one day she will
spread her wings to fly
in a land of no bars.β
Regards
PratZ
In a way all of us are Puppets, Flying high is also not freeing oneself because, then we are chained to the sky π Nice one! Happy Blogging!
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Thank you Josh ! Well said π new perspective ! You too dear π Happy blogging !
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Thank you sweetheart π
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amazing π
pleasure to read something written by you after a long time π
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Thank you mahesh π
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Thank you Jay ππ
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Pratz, after a long time with a puppet story…
Hope you are having fun in your new life dear..
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Yo, puppet of life. It controls every action we have to take. And yes, having fun in new life π
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but who has that controlling power, it is with us only no…
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Wow…now that’s some real emotin there..βΊβΊ
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Haha thanks a lot π
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No mention ππ
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Very nicely written! Relates to each one of us in one or the other way.
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Yeah π
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Penned the pain of being caged really well. Poignant poen
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Thank you so much π
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Shackles, sometimes even the invisible ones, are the scariest. But then, the brave heart that continues to hope is what pushes one beyond the horizon. You can never cage a free mind and heart.
Beautifully written. The struggle, the hope, the grievance of being caged.
You may look at a small poem I tried on flying (one who can’t be caged. Not good at poems though :D) Cheers
http://nomadwrites.com/?p=230
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Hey thanks a lot for dropping by with such beautiful comments. π Means a lot. Will definitely read your blog. π
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She has Gathered the Last Feather.
This Time Evolved Better.
The Time has come to Fly,
Cause She aims to cross the sky.
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this is lovely π
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And so are your writings.πππ
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ha ha thank you π
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Nice post!!!
Check out my blog also to experience the magic of letters.
Hope you will enjoy it. π
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