Musings of the past,
peek at the feathered quill
to plunge into the cobalt waters.
Waiting to lash out
her overwhelming thoughts.
Of the crimson soul
on to the empty parchments.
She glared down,
with teary eyes,
like a pearl drilling down,
the embedded aisles of the cheeks,
Cobalt turned pearl like tears,
Fell onto the papyrus,
Soaking and
Absorbing the vaccum,
Extensive static pressure
shredded the feathered quill,
coaxing it to break
and made an invisible,
scar to the emptiness……
Yet she said everything,
with wet fossils of her tears,
on to the magical papyrus…
I wonder what made her to stop ??
Regards,
Pratz
Beautifully written! 🙂
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Thank you Karthik 🙂
Seems like need to search you on Facebook inbox 😛
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Haha! 😛 😀
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🙂
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You are not so good at Facebook! 😛 As you are with WordPress I guess.
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Haha why do you say so ?
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I referred to your “search in inbox” message! 😀
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I already did. Couldn’t find you.
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Oh! Gmail! 😀
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slpratyushakapilavai@gmail.com
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Cool! 🙂
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The opening lines paint such a vivid picture of the anticipation of and giving into the urges to write. I love the metaphor for ink – cobalt waters – and the image of visualizing the ink splashing on the parchment. And how hear wrenching those absorbed tears and invisible scar. Your writing has texture that only the heart can feel through the eyes’ rendering of your pen. Beautifully written.
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That’s one amazing compliment. Thank you so much. I am really glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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…and it is well deserved, Pratyusha… you are welcome and I did, love it very much 🙂
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wet fossils of her tears…
love the phrase. 🙂
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Thank you so much :* 🙂
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Beautiful lines Pratz. 😀
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Thank you babes ! 🙂
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Always welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful. 😀
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Thank you Rupzz :* 🙂
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My pleasure, Piku. :*
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This is beautiful :*
lunge into the cobalt waters
teary eyes,like a pearl drilling down
wet fossils of her tears.
Wonderful lines. 🙂
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Thank you so much darling !!
:* :*
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Really wonderful 😉
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Thank you Rohit 🙂
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Beautifully written…….
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Thank you dear 🙂
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Beautiful:)
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Thank you uppi 🙂
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Welcome:)
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Such an artsy and exquisitely crafted piece. Beautiful.
Here’s hoping you’ll visit my blog too at http://www.thewhimsicalandwanderingsoul.wordpress.com
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Thank You Vidisha. I just read your blog. It’s amazing.!! The way you have expressed is amazing !! Definitely following you to read more such stuff 🙂
Thanks for the appreciation 🙂
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And thank you Pratyusha for brightening up my day. :’)
Means a lot to me.
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So did you 🙂
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I’m glad to know that. Thank you for your kindness. Hope you have a great day ahead. 😀
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Hehe. You too have a great day 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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🙂 Thank you
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really nice lines… 🙂
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Thank You Teena 🙂
Glad you liked it ! 🙂
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you are welcome.! 🙂
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🙂
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soaking and absorbing vaccum,extensive static pressure…..oh my god dear…..u remind me of my friend…physics nerd….
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Hahahaha. Thanks babes.
I hate physics to be frank 😛
Phoebic! !
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I love physics…..because we didnt have a teacher to handle that subject in school….almost all physics hours were free and we love something we learn by ourselves….
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True that ! 🙂 😉
Physics was always scary for me. That was pretty much the reason for taking up commerce. 😛 definitely knew what I dint want to do ahhaha
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ha ha……
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Mast ❤
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Thank you Darsh 🙂
Bas tum hi ho 😛
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Gana gaa le Tum Hi ho 😀
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Sure ji 😛
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Wow! This is beautiful! You are a wonderful writer!
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Thank you so much Lola 🙂
Glad you loved it 🙂
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Wonderful just wonderful..
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Thank you darling 🙂 :*
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I must say..your writes are indeed wonderful 🙂
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Hey, thank you so much 🙂
Means a lot !! 🙂
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Haha Thanks Ajay 🙂
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😋☺☺
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your blog is beyond awesome…
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Haha thanks a lot for the appreciation. Means a lot 🙂
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Do you listen to pink floyd?
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Yes 🙂
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Then what about the wall album
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I have fallen in love with this. Your writing has such a smooth flow. xx
__Aimen
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I want such perfection in my writings Pratz!! You are an adept writer, must say. Loved it. ❤
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Wow ! A compliment coming from you makes me fly like a bird in the sky
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You are already flying like a bird ❤
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Muahhhhh love u soo much baby ❤❤❤❤
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love you too ❤
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