His poisonous fangs
pinned deep inside my skin,
and in my blood.
You are an intoxicating drug,
spreading thirst
like forest fire,
into my pale heart.
the quiver in your speech,
makes me shiver with sweet pain,
and winding goosebumps
wrapped in your arms,
wanting to have more..
I wonder if I do the same to you..
Regards,
Pratz
Nice take on the prompt!
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Hey, thanks 🙂
Had to post something before the clock strikes 12 hahaha. So wrote this in hosh posh. Maybe could have written better. 🙂
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Awesome! Thanks for sharing…wonderfully-written! As the cliché goes, we are our own worst critics! 🙂
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Pratyusha a sincere advice for your future posts!! Please write always around 12 in the night and that too in hosh posh. Looks the secret of your wonderful post!!!
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Hahaha. Maybe, that’s what I have been doing since last 2 days. 😛
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Nice one Pratyusha ❤
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Thank you jenny 🙂
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Nice one…:-)
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Thank you 🙂
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good going. Came out very well even after a long day. 🙂
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lovely poem sis you rock..wow nice….you are the best
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Wow! Full of depth! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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